I know it’s tempting to see how others do something before you try that something yourself–you can learn about someone else’s approach, the way they formulate their thinking, the concepts they engage with. But, when it comes to writing a college application essay, no one can tell your story like you. So, even though we’re about to look at three more examples of successful personal statements, I encourage you to keep that motto in mind. This motto will also help you effectively assess the quality of these essays for yourself–not as stories you can steal, but as expressions of each writer’s unique and inimitable perspective. We all have a way of seeing the world and what’s most valuable about these essays is how that singular point of view shines through.
I will point out three features, shared across these three essays. As you are working on your own Common Application Personal Statement, I encourage you to ask yourself: does my essay include these features?
- Each Essay Showcases A Variety of Experiences: You will see that across these three essays, the writers share a variety of different experiences with their reader. In the “Captain’s Club Essay,” the writer moves from reading with second graders to playing varsity basketball to organizing a Trunk or Treat event for their community. Even if you want to keep a tight focus on a particular part of your life, it’s always a good idea to bring your reader to many different experiences. This will not only ensure that your reader gets a full picture of who you are, but it will keep things interesting for them as well! I will say that although each essay highlights several of the authors’ experiences, they all feel cohesive. How is that? Well…
- Each Essay Presents a Theme: These essays all have a strong theme that they introduce at the end of their introductions. In the “21 Chump Street Essay,” the author uses their opening anecdote to set up the main idea they explore throughout their writing: taking on seemingly impossible challenges. What’s brilliant about this essay is that it takes this theme in surprising directions, using it as a catalyst to explore this writer’s personal identity. But none of these three essays feel stuck in the past. They also…
- Each Essay Points Their Reader to the Future: It might be as subtle as in the “Solutions Essay,” highlighting for your reader what you’ve learned and how the lessons you explore throughout your writing will push you forward in your life. While a small detail, it’s important in giving your reader a sense of what’s in store for you. Remember: you’re applying to spend the next four years at these school’s your applying to! Give your reader a taste of how you’ll spend that time.
These three essays are great models to guide you as you work on crafting your own Personal Statements. However, it’s important to remember the reason why we look at exemplar texts like this: to get a sense of the how, not the what. And as these excellent essays demonstrate, what matters most is the way in which you tell your story. You’ve got your own perspective on your unique experiences that your reader is itching to learn about. Go ahead–jump in!
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